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Friday, October 18, 2019

Caitlin's Marshmallows








2 comments:

  1. Hello Caitlin.You have used some great describing words in your writing.I LOVE roasting marshmallows on the fire.I hope that if I had a bon fire that the monster in your story,doesn't come.Maybe next time you could make your pictures match your story.

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  2. Great writing Caitlin. Please make only include pictures that are relevant to your story.

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