My Amazing Narrative

We have been learning to write a Narrative. We had to bass the narrative on a photo. Here is mine (and the photo)

One day I was walking through the woods and I heard a big loud crash! I ran out of the woods and came to the edge of a big beautiful lake. CRASH! I heard the waves crash against the cliff I was standing on. Suddenly I felt someone pushing me closer and closer to the edge but when I turned around to see what it was I fell straight into the lake!  When I got to the bottom of the lake I passed out and when I woke up laying down on the sandy beach and the lake was calm. 

I saw something swim away quickly. I caught a glimpse of its tail before it swam away. The tail was glittery, scaly and it was pink and purple. It looked so majestic. I looked around me and realised that I better be getting home. I didn’t want to leave because I knew I would forget where it was. So I  picked up some stones, and left a trail of stones on the way home.

I started walking, dropping stones as I went. When I was back in the woods I saw something move. I looked around but saw nothing, so I continued walking. Suddenly I saw a creepy doll. The doll had long yellow hair, black shoes on, a black dress and had a small brown teddy bear stuck to her hand. The reason she was so creepy was that I saw her eyes move. Not like one of those blinking dolls. Her eyes moved side to side. I ran home as fast as I could still dropping stones. But that was a bad idea. Then I thought that the doll was the one that pushed me into the lake. At frost I thought it was crazy, but the more I thought about it the more it made scene. 

That night I couldn't sleep. I was too scared to close my eyes just in case the doll arrived. Suddenly my door swung open but there was no one there! Then I saw something fly into my room! It was a fairy. She sat on my night table and told me that he would watch the door so the doll wouldn't appear. I was going to ask her how she knew about the doll. But I fell asleep as soon as she finished her sentence. 

The next morning I got ready and then went outside and followed the trail of stones. I was a bit scared because I thought I might find the doll again but she didn't appear. So I decided the doll was just a hallucination. 

The reason I was going back was because I needed to see  what it was that swam away from me. Although I didn't want to fall in the lake again I knew it was the only way to find it. So I leaped into the water. Suddenly I saw something swimming towards me. 

It was a mermaid! She touched me and I started to feel a little weird. I opened my eyes and saw that I was growing a pink and purple mermaid tail! “What’s happening!” I screamed. “I touched you so you're turning into a mermaid.” sad the mermaid.  “My name is Sky .” said Sky  “My name is Ruby” I said. Suddenly I heard my mum call me “How do I change back into a human!” I asked anxiously. “You just touch the sand,” said Sky. When I touched the sand my tail disappeared and I went home with my mum. Every single day I go into the lake and play with sky.

The End