My Spectacular Narrative

At school we have been learning to write a Narrative. We had to base the narrative on a photo. Here is mine (and the photo)

It was a dark and stormy night. I was going for a walk down the wet and windy road when I saw something running towards me. I started to run but a big gust of wind blew against my face. I released I was standing on a sewer drain, and it couldn't stay in place with me standing on it!  

Suddenly the sewer drain collapsed and I fell down into the sewer! When I fell I saw something move. It moved so quickly I could hardly see what it was. All I knew was that there was something in the sewer with me. Something creepy and small. I decided to keep moving to try and find another sewer drain. It was creepy but something in my brain kept telling me to keep moving. So I did. 

I kept walking and I saw a word written on the wall in red. Molly! I was starting to get very scared and I felt like I should turn back but something kept pulling me further. Suddenly I saw a creepy doll on the wall behind the doll was the word Molly!  “The doll’s name must be Molly.” I thought.

The doll had long yellow  hair, a black dress, black shoes and a brown teddy bear stuck to her hand.  I went to have a better look at the doll, when I saw something move again. This time it came running at me! “AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!” I screamed. It was still coming closer and closer. When it got to me I released it was just a little baby rat. “That must have been what I saw moving when I fell,” I thought. The rat ran away and I looked at the doll. “It must have been left here many years ago,” I said.  I walked past it going closer and closer to the red wall.

When I got to the end of the cold damp sewer there was a big red wall. The wall had a wet black ladder on it. “This ladder must lead up to the surface.” I said with my hopes up. Then I realised that the baby rat I saw didn't have a family. I climbed back down the ladder and found the baby rat. I carefully picked her up and put her in my pocket where she fell asleep. I named her Ruby and I started to climb the ladder. 

When I got to the top of the ladder I climbed out of another drain. I ran home and found out Ruby was very dirty and she seemed very hungry. When I finished feeding Ruby I gave her a bath in the black sink. Then I found out that she was actually a white rat! She was adorable. 

The only problem was I needed to find somewhere where she could sleep. I went to the shop and got a big cage. I put the cage in my room on my desk. I filled the cage up with toys, a food and water bowl, a mouse bed and a Hamster Wheel so she could stretch her legs as I was sleeping.

The End!