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Wednesday, March 18, 2020

the greatest gift I can give my dog

we had to make a story about a little movie that we watch and it was about the greatest gift I can give my family for christmas but instead I did it for my dog's birthday whenever that is.

The greatest gift I can give my dog for her birthday is the very expensive tagawar toy that will not easily break. It has all her Favourite colours in it blue, pink & orange and she can play with AJ with it who is our neighbour and her doggie BFF AJ always finds a way to escape her backyard and find a way to get into ours and plays with Bonnie my dog. 

That she loves every time I take her into the pet shop. She always won't look at any other toy she just will look at that one so I know she will love it.  It is her dream toy. She's been wanting it ever since we fast  took her to the pet shop. 
That was when she saw some other dog playing with it outside the shop she was only a puppy. One year old in dog years it was so cute.
This year she is turning 18 in dog years but only 3 years in human years. She's not a little puppy anymore and I'm so proud of her.

1 comment:

  1. Good morning Caitlin.
    Have you based this story on your own dog Bonnie?.
    Just remember to proof read your work to make sure that it makes sense.It's better to write a small story,and have it correct,than it is to write heaps and have it all mixed up.
    I look forward to hearing from you.

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