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Friday, April 17, 2020

My Spectacular story

Hi, I wrote a really good story for my narrative writing, here it is! But you have to read all of it because it gets good middle!!!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿฑ๐Ÿ‘‘❤๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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13 comments:

  1. Nicola ScottApril 17, 2020 at 12:14 PM

    Caitlin, I love how you have responded to feedback. It is great to see you using speech marks when people are talking. What part of this story do you like the most?

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    1. AnonymousApril 24, 2020 at 9:29 AM

      The middle because it gets intense

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  2. AnonymousApril 17, 2020 at 12:19 PM

    hi caitlin, i like how you changed the colour of some of the words. maybe next time don't use so much emoji's. bye sophiah

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    1. AnonymousApril 24, 2020 at 9:33 AM

      you are right I did go a bit overboard with the emoji's thank you for telling me cuz I did not notice that until now :D

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  3. Miss GlendayApril 17, 2020 at 12:19 PM

    Wow Caitlin, your story is very exciting the emoji's help create the excitement!
    What was Tom making when the fire started?

    Awesome mahi (work)!

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    1. AnonymousApril 24, 2020 at 9:37 AM

      ty and Tom was trying to make lightning and did it and then the lightning made fire

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  4. Mrs CassidyApril 19, 2020 at 3:15 PM

    Hello Caitlin.
    I think the emojis are a great part of the story.I like that you used different colours for the text.It made the story interesting.
    I would love for you to show me how to add emojis to my comments.Can you tell me how to do it or would you need to show me?.

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    1. AnonymousApril 24, 2020 at 9:39 AM

      I can tell you and ty๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

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    2. AnonymousApril 24, 2020 at 9:44 AM

      you double click where you what to put it and then you click on emoji
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  5. Claire JonesApril 19, 2020 at 7:10 PM

    Hi Caitlin
    Love your story, very exciting and lots of great describing words. Great to see you so interested on the Google Hangouts each day.Claire

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  6. Mrs CassidyApril 21, 2020 at 1:34 PM

    Hello Caitlin.
    I can't wait to see what other super work you have been working on.I hope to see another one of your blogs soon.

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  7. AnonymousMay 8, 2020 at 2:35 PM

    ty I have some more woke

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