Thursday, April 30, 2020
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Hello Caitlin. Another great blog from you. I really enjoyed this story and was very keen to get to the end and make sure you and Max had survived. I like the way the story flowed nicely and you used paragraphs well. Keep up the good work. Claire
ReplyDeleteCaitlin you should be very proud of your writing. I like the way you are taking time to think about your ideas and that you have a problem and a solution in your narrative. Would you like to go into space?
ReplyDeleteCaitlin,this story is spectacular!I really enjoyed reading it.You have used some really interesting describing words.You gave your story a beginning,middle and end.I was so happy that you and Max managed to find a way back home.I was just wondering..with your space ship crashing into the moon,is that why there are craters on the moon?.
ReplyDeleteHello Caitlin.
ReplyDeleteIt's been a while since I have seen you at karakia.I hope all is well.I just thought I would check to see if you had loaded any more learning onto your blog.I would love to see what other work you have been working on.I will check again soon.Take care.