They slowly walked towards it. As they got closer the screams got louder. When Isabel and Rosabell got up to the abandoned graveyard’s gate the deafening screams echoed through the cold night.
They climbed up the graveyard’s gate and then looked for the thing that the screams were coming from. Then they saw the most frightening thing yet. Something dead was coming out of the ground!!!!!!!
Isabel and Rosabell slowly backed away but then Isabel tripped on a gravestone. She fell and the thing came closer and closer she got up and ran for her life!!!
Then Isabel and Rosabell found out they were lying wide awake in bed with her mum and dad with hot chocolates. “ it was just a bad dream” they thought to themselves and had their hot chocolates.
Wow Caitlin. This is a great story. I like the way you had all the action in order. It was a good twist at the end saying it was a bad dream. I like that you have changed some of your sentence starts. Did both the girls have the same dream?
ReplyDeleteHi Caitlin. Fantastic story full of suspense, I have been trying to imagine what the scary thing looked like and what a good idea that it was just a bad dream. Hot chocolate in bed with Mum and Dad sounds like a delicious idea.
ReplyDeleteyes thay did
ReplyDeletehehehe I got the bad dream and hot chocolates in bed from a book
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