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Friday, October 16, 2020

Description Writing

 For the last week we have been writing some Description Writing about a picture of a beach. Here is mine.

The water stands as still as a statue. I can feel the breeze blowing against my face.The palm tree waves to me as I walk along the peaceful beach. I hear a little wave crash against the smooth, soft sand. I look at the beautiful water. People run into the water and little kids hold ice creams. The sound of babies crying echoed through my ears.





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  1. Mrs CassidyJanuary 8, 2021 at 4:01 PM

    I feel as though I am at the beach just by reading your super story Caitlin.
    The use of the describing words makes your story powerful.

    I used to love going to Kaka Point to visit my nana and grandad and then walk along the beach.I would go down and look in the rocks pools or swim in the small creek and look for smelt.

    What do you like doing when you go to the beach?.

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