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Friday, November 6, 2020

Description Writing

A few weeks ago we started doing some Description Writing. Here is the picture we had to write about. 

“Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to you.” The song echoes through my mind. The bubbles in the fizzy have a cracking sound. 

All my friends are surrounding me, with pink and blue party hats on. The balloons in the background are banging against each other. There is a present on the table with red wrapping on it. 

The caramel apples on a pink plate smell as good as  flowers. I look at the chocolate birthday cake on the table, it smells delicious.


1 comment:

  1. Your words transported me into your picture Caitlin.It was great to enjoy your party with you and your friends.
    The chocolate cake was delicious.It's a shame I dropped my piece onto the freshly washed, kitchen floor.
    Never mind,your medium sized,brown dog will lick it up with her long,pink,wet tongue.
    Are you having a great holiday so far?.

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