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Friday, November 20, 2020

My Amazing Narrative

 In class We have been writing a Narrative about a video called Marshmallows. Here is mine . (and the video link

Marshmallows

Smoke danced in the sky with the stars. The fire was as hot as the sun in the cold night air. I was camping in the woods. I saw a shadow creep across the grass. I looked behind me and saw a humongous lime green monster!!! 


The monster had a long tale and lime green skales all over him. He had green eyes and three legs, sharp teeth and long things that stuck out of his ears. He had a long tongue and floating eyebrows. 


I stood up and turned around.  I put up the stick that I was roasting my marshmallow on and pointed it at the monster.  The monster's eyes widened and he ate the marshmallow. So I took another one out of the bag. The monster did a flip and landed on his back so I gave him a marshmallow.  “I have no more marshmallows!” I said. 


The monster's face darkened. I ran as fast as I coud and I tripped on a rock.  Suddenly the monster sprang towards me, I took a pillow and held it against my face. The monster's eyes widened and I threw the pillow away. The monster sprang towards it and I ran all the way home.


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