Police Report

 

Hello everyone, 

Caitlin here and today I will show you my Police Report writing. We had to write about an animation robbery video. Here is the link to the video!

Here is my work. 

I closed the store and started walking home when I saw a suspicious looking man in a black car. I looked at the number plate and it said 6ROB25. Then the man went inside the shop next to mine and then I realised that they had a gun... 

I ran across the street and pressed my face up to the glass. One man was wearing a brown Ski Mask and gray top. The other man was wearing a cyan hoodie and big lips that looked like they had been stung by 100 bees. 

One man pointed a gun at the shop keeper and the other man put a big bag on the table. “Put the money in the bag!” said one of the men. “Or we’ll shoot!” said the other. 

I knew I had seen enough so I picked up my phone and dialled 111. “111 Whats your emergency?” asked someone. “I need the cops!” I said “Where are you?” they asked “ABC street dairy."                                 “Ok we’ll be there in 30 minutes!”

“PUT THE MONEY IN THE BAG, NOW!!!” yelled one robber as the other robber ran and jumped up and slipped on the self and passed out on the floor. 

I snuck into the dairy and started throwing cans of spaghetti at the robbers. The robber ran over to the spaghetti selves and looked. But I  had time to go to the baked beans selves and started throwing things, anything at them.

 NEE NAW NEE NAW!!! Went the cop cars as they pulled up. “FBI OPEN UP!!” yelled one cop even though the door was already open.

What do you think of my work? Comment your answer! 

See you soon!